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дантам, объявив, что нынче стрелять не намерен, и поединок тем и окончился.

Я вышел в отставку и удалился в это местечко. С тех пор не прошло ни одного дня, чтоб я не думал о мщении. Нынче час мой настал...»

Translated by Y. Nemetzky:

THE SHOT

My curiosity was strongly roused. "And you didn't fight him?" I asked. "I supposed you were parted by circumstances?"

"I did fight him," replied Silvio, "and I have here a souve­nir of our duel."

He rose and extracted from a cardboard box a braided red cap with a gilt tassel (the kind that the French call a bonnet de police). He put it on, and I saw that there was a bullet-hole in it an inch above the forehead.

"You are aware," continued Silvio, "that I once served in the Nth Hussar regiment. And you know my disposition. I am accustomed to be first in everything; but in my youth it was a passion with me. Rowdiness was the fashion in our day, and I was the greatest fire-eater in the army. We were proud of getting drunk, and I once drank the famous Burtsov, immortalised by the poet Denis Davydov, under the table. Duels took place almost every minute in our regiment, and there was hardly one in which I was not either a second or an active participator. My comrades idolised me, while the regimental commanders, who were con­stantly changing, regarded me as an inevitable evil.

"I was calmly (or perhaps not so calmly!) enjoying my fame, when a wealthy youth, the scion of a distinguished line whom I will not name, joined the regiment. Never had I seen one so bril­liant and so favoured by fortune! Figure to yourself youth, brains, looks, boisterous spirits, reckless courage, a resounding name, money which he expended lavishly, and which never seemed to

come to an end, and try to imagine the impression he was bound


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to make on us. My title of champion was shaken. Attracted by my reputation, he tried at first to cultivate my friendship, but I re­ceived his advances coldly, and he desisted without the slightest regret. I conceived a bitter hatred for him. His popularity in the regiment and among women drove me to utter desperation. I tried to pick a quarrel with him — he capped my epigrams with epi­grams of his own, which always seemed to me wittier and fresher than mine, and which were certainly infinitely more amusing. He merely jested, my shafts were poisoned. At last one evening at a ball given by a Polish landowner, seeing him the cynosure of all the ladies, especially of the lady of the house, with whom I was having an affair, I uttered some words of vulgar raillery in his ear. He flushed up and struck me in the face. Our hands flew to our sword-hilts. Ladies swooned, we were forcibly parted, and we set off to fight a duel that very night.

"It was the hour of dawn. I stood at the appointed place with my three seconds. I awaited my opponent with indescrib­able impatience. It was spring and the sun rose early, so it was already hot. I caught sight of him from afar. He was on foot, car­rying his tunic on his sword, and accompanied by a single sec­ond. We went to meet him. He approached with his cap, full of cherries, in his hand. The seconds paced out twelve steps between us. I was to shoot first, but I was so shaken with rage that I could not rely on the steadiness of my hand, and yielded the first shot to him. But this my opponent would not agree to. It was decided to draw lots — the lot fell to him, the perpetual favourite of fortune. He took aim and shot through my cap. Then it was my turn. At last his life was in my hands. I gazed keenly at him, trying to discern the slightest trace of anxiety. He faced my pistol, select­ing ripe cherries out of his cap and spitting out the stones, which almost reached to where I was standing. His coolness infuriated me. What's the good of depriving him of his life, I thought, when hr doesn't even value it? A fiendish thought passed through my mind. I lowered the hand holding the pistol.

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pleasure to breakfast. 1 do not wish to disturb you.1 'You don't disturb me in the least,' he retorted, 'be so good as to fire. Just as you please, however. You owe me a shot, and I shall always be at your service.' I turned to the seconds and told them I did not intend to shoot at the moment, and the duel ended at that.

"I resigned from the army and retired to this little place. Ever since, not a single day has passed without my meditating revenge. My hour has now struck..."

Translated by Bernard Guerney:

THE SHOT

My curiosity was greatly aroused.

"You didn't fight him?" 1 asked. "Certain circumstances probably prevented your meeting —"

" I did fight him," replied Sylvio, "and here is a memento of our duel."

He got up and took out of a cardboard box a red cap, trimmed with a gold tassel and gallon (what the French call a bonnet depolice) and put it on — it had been riddled with a bullet about an inch above his forehead.

"As you know," Sylvio went on, "I served in the — th Reg­iment of Hussars. You are aware what my character is like — I am used to being the first in all things, but when I was young this was a mania with me. In our day wildness was all the fashion; I was the wildest fellow in the army. We used to boast of our drink­ing ability; Burtzov, whom Denis Davidov has hymned, was in his glory then — and 1 drank him under the table. Hardly a mo­ment passed in our regiment without a duel; I was either a second or a principal in all of them. My messmates deified me, while the regimental commanders — there seemed to be a different one every few minutes! — regarded me as a necessary evil.

I was enjoying my fame at my ease (or rather with unease), when a certain young man from a rich and distinguished family

— I would rather not name him — joined our regiment. Never

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since the day I was born , have I met so illustrious a favourite of fortune! Picture him in your imagination: youth, brains, good looks, the maddest gaiety, the most reckless bravery, a resound­ing name, money which he could not keep track of and of which he never ran short — and then imagine what an effect he was bound to produce among us. My supremacy was shaken. Capti­vated by my reputation he at first sought my friendship, but 1 received him coldly and, without the least regret, he became aloof to me. I grew to hate him. His successes in the regiment and in feminine society threw me into utter despair. I took to seeking quarrels with him; he responded to my epigrams which always seemed to me more spontaneous and pointed than mine, and which, of course, were incomparably more mirth-provoking; he was jest­ing, whereas I was being malicious. Finally — the occasion was a ball at the house of a Polish landowner — seeing him the cyno­sure of all the ladies, and especially of the hostess herself, with whom I had a liaison, I whispered some vulgar insult or other in his ear. He flared up and gave me a slap in the face. We dashed for our sabres; the ladies swooned away; we were dragged apart, and that same night we set out to fight a duel.

"This was at dawn. I was standing at the designated spot with my three seconds. With inexplicable impatience did I await my opponent. The spring sun had risen, and it was already grow­ing hot. I saw him from afar. He was on foot, the coat of his uniform slung on a sabre over his shoulder, and was accompa­nied by but one second. We went toward him. He approached, holding his cap, which was filled with cherries. Our seconds measured off twelve paces for us. I had to fire first, but my resentment made me so agitated that 1 could not rely on my hand and, to give myself time to cool down, I considered the first shot to him; to this my opponent would not agree. It was decided to cast lots; the first number fell to him, the constant favourite of fortune. He took aim, and his bullet riddled my cap. It was my turn. His life, at last, was in my hands; I eyed him avidly, trying to detect even a single shadow of uneasiness. He

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